Holy freakin' Doo Dah! I had this all written up, then I was stupid, so now I have to do it all again! You'd better appreciate!
It frusterates me that Draco and HErmione are staying in that "just friends" mode, you both hae feelings for each other, you both should know it, so just admit it, and get it over with. Get together, and love each other, it's not that difficult. JUST DO IT! I've been saying that for the past eight billion reviews, so you should take my word as law and just frekain Doo Dah do it!
I love the emotional beginning in Draco's POV. It was most awesome. Especially paragraphs three and four, and this part: "His shattered heart, his broken self," was wicked great.
And I loved the part where Ron insults PAnsy, you should write more of that!
As well as the part where Professor Height threatens her students. I still think she's good, it's just awesoem that she knows that curse. I wish I could use a curse like that for children who don't listen. Just to scare them, that's all *nervous chuckle* I swear!
"on an inanimate nature disappear." - Did you mean "of an inanimate..."?
Ah, and the mystery of the broom begins to unravel. Trust HErmione to find the answers...I wonder who touched it now. Too bad that their plan didn't fall through. Get it? Fall through. Ahhahahahahaha!
Pkay, never mind. now I know who did it. Wow...Blaise...I would never have thought it'd be Blaise. I thought he was totally good. never saw it coming. Great work. That's the mark of a truly great suspense writer. Keep the readers in suspense until you want them to know the answer, then let them see it was the person they least expected, but you've laid the clues for it the whole time.
fraudulent - Excellent word, lol. I love when random "smart" words jump in!
O...hope the Halloween Dance scene is next..witht he dancing, and the love, and Harry's date...who I'm pretty sure with be Falesha Height..no, just kidding, that's just who I want it to be, lol. I have no idea who his date will be. I can't think of any other girls at Hogwarts besdies the Slytherin ones, and he wouldn't go for them, then there's Hermione, but she's obviously taken. Then there's Ginny and Cho, but you hate them, so...that leaves us with who? Moaning Myrtle?
o, is Professor Height related to James? Then she REALLY can't be Harry's date, lol..let's hope not, that would be gross (for her to be his date), although, to be related to him would be really cool, and also a huge cover- up...stupid idiotic Dumbledor and crew!
Great chapter. I really enjoyed it from start to finish (event hough I had to read parts of the beginning twice because of my mess up), it was wicked awesoem, and I give it 5 stars, two thumbs up, and a pair of fancy lace panties!
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Chapter 19: Confusion and Realization