Penname: Phalaysheo [Contact]
Real name: Cindy
Member Since: 04/19/2006
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Draco's entire world is turned upside down when he's told his parents are not the Malfoys. Struggling not to be killed and to become close with his brother, he falls in love with one of his worst enemies: his brother's best friend. Sum inside.
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Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 95900; Read Count: 17363; Completed: No

Updated: 06/20/2006; Published: 04/18/2006
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
05/08/2006
And the truth comes out- James and Lily were DORKS! Why else would they invite their teachers to their wedding. Okay, okay, fine, so I know they were more than that, but whatever!

You've also stayed very true to Dumbledore's character, that sneaky bastard, always appearing when you least expect him and when Harry's doing something he probably shouldn't. And then his way of speaking and giving answers...kudos on the great job!

Stupid people...always keeping things from them...kill them! Kill them all! Hopefully there's not anything ELSE that's being kept from the poor "children".

"Headboy and girl commiting acts of which they're supposed to stop," He cocked his eyebrow, "How does that not sound like fun?" - Sounds dirty...I like it!

Good thing. For a while there I was worried there'd be no Dramione action, and then there was, and now I'm happy. I love dancing to no music...and when people dance to no music. I sure as heck hope Draco's a good singer though, kind of kills the mood a little bit if they're not! lol...but I'm sure he is...Draco's like, perfect or something!

I would have never guessed that Narcissa Malfoy would be a country music fan...

It's quite obvious they both want each other. It isn't often I dance that romantically with my friends, or sing love ballads to them...as a matter of fact, I never do! Just get over it and get together already!

It was a very sweetly-written "love scene" I really enjoyed it a lot. I enjoyed the rest of the story to. I hope the mystery will be unshrouded soon, I'm really curious about what Professor Height and Sirius Black have to do with it all, and what they're keeping from the kids, and why. Write that chapter soon!

*#*#*#*# Don't you know, that beastiality is against the law? *#*#*#*#



Chapter 18: Mysterious Ways
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/20/2006
Great story! Keep up the wonderful work! Can't wait to read the next chapter. I love your writing; you're like the best writer ever!


Chapter 4: Telling Friends
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/20/2006
AWESOME! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES!!!


Chapter 1: Family
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/20/2006

A little slow, but I understand that it's ground work. I love this story.




Chapter 2: It Begins
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/20/2006
Wicked awesome work!


Chapter 3: Telling Harry
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/30/2006

Hey, wicked awesome story! I read it all the way through, lol...Here's hoping you write lots more soon! I especially liked how Draco and Hermione and getting along...let's hope for more love stuff soon! ;)

I really want to can that bastard Lucius! What an idiot!

I like how the relationship between Harry and Draco is coming along. Though I do wonder why the kids aren't teasing a little bit more...hmm, must be because Draco's such a sex god! ;)

Update soon, cuase I want to know how Harry and Ron are coming along (friendship-wise, you sicko!), and Draco and Hermione, cause Hermione is my favorite, and I like Draco better as a Potter, you did a good job writing him noce. I think he was the best! KUDOS!




Chapter 12: Growing Closer
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/30/2006

Oh green silk pajamas? Cool. Wicked awesome story, I really loved all of it. Keep writing those chapters, because it makes me happy! :D




Chapter 6: Prophecy
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/30/2006

LOVING IT MORE AND MORE!




Chapter 5: On His Own
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
04/30/2006

Great chapter amanda. i hope you wrote more. you're my favorite.

 love cindy

 




Chapter 7: Trying
Reviewer: Phalaysheo (Signed)
05/03/2006
I don't care what anybody says, I love you way more than them!

Dun dun dun...and little do the professors at Hogwarts know, but the Head boy and girl are sleeping together! Wow, great supervision there guys! Okay, so maybe they're not sleeping together, but Draco wants to hold Hermione before she falls asleep, and he wants to see her wake up...if that's not foreshadowing, I don't know what is!

Of course Harry's jealous. His best friend is spending more time with Draco! I remember being jealous over my best friend's girlfriend, but she was a skank, and I'm off topic, so to sum it up in a main point for those of less intelligent status: poor Harry. Hermione will go back to you, as soon as Draco confesses his love. It's okay...

Draco should just let the students see that he's in love with Hermione. After all, they already have enough teasing ammo. And besdies, love knows no bounds. I was told that by a very wise person, meaning, too bad for Hogwarts, he should be proud to love such a cool girl!

His nice guy image was more attractive than bad boy? But don't all girls have a bad boy? it's one of those special things. Although the poetry reading Draco is much better than the cursing, evil one, in any case. Unless you're into that. Like Pansy Parkinson. I love that she's a slut! lol, I know I've told you before, but I rally do. i think it's funny that the Hogwart's students can have sex and stuff...it seems so...anti-sex and too mature for those little gushkins.

Well now, he can't save Parvati a dance, he has to keep them all for Hermione! It's only fair...

WHOA! WHOA! Harry was talking to a girl on his bed, with the curtains closed...at midnight! yeah sure - "talking"

I like how you keep the original character traits of the characters, and make it authentic, but at the same time, you add your own element and make it original with a slightly different twist to each of their characters, or in Draco's case, a vwery large twist, but whatever, same concept.

What exactly is exploding snap, lol...I know it's a card game, but it doesn't sound like any card game I'd be willing to play. I'd probably lose an ear. or worse! My eyes! then I couldn't read your writings! OH THE HORROR!

I'd image Narcissa would look extremely ridiculous in a Muggle theater! lol...oh boy...

She was scared of heights too, well, I'm guessing she wasn't really into Quidditch then eh? And just how tall was this slide exactly, that she was so terrified of it?

Narcissa should have taken Draco and gone into hiding with him long ago. I suppose Lucius could have found her and hurt her, but I think Dumbledoor would protect her, and Lucius couldn't have done anything maybe. Hmm...too bad.

There were quite a few words that were squishedtogether (lol, see the demo?) during the bit when Draco's talking about what he and his mother did together. QUITE A FEW! Like, seriously, I'm being totally serious when I say that. Capice?

SAy there...do I see a relationship forming between Harry and that attractive DADA teacher?

WTF? You have to update soon again, because now I'm really serious as to what they are keeping from him. I think I might know, but that could just be my dumb ideas...and how, oh how does Professor Height know Sirius?

Anyhoo, that's all for this "chappie", I really really liked it. Not more than the last one of course, but this was great too. This is your best story so far. It's my favorite, oh and by the way, I like yopur writing!

*#*#*# At least I'm not a Hufflepuff! *#*#*#



Chapter 17: Memories and Secrets