Penname: lillyb2124 [Contact]
Real name: Susan
Member Since: 06/28/2005
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Dudley Dursley is ordered by the court to change his deliquent ways. Guess who is in charge of his house arrest? Harry Potter, of course. Based on a true story.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 40169; Read Count: 14761; Completed: No

Updated: 10/07/2006; Published: 09/06/2005
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
01/07/2006
I just love this story, its just so cute. And as for it being to gross I think fart humor is under rated. (one of my son's favorite books is "Walter the farting dog")

Author's Response: Thank you Lilly! I happen to agree with you on the gas-passing. I did worry that people would be offended. I may have to check the library for the Walter book for my kids! Thanks again!



Chapter 7: Stink Sap and a Permanent Sticking Charm
A HBP Missing Moment. Harry's thoughts on the night Dumbledore dies while he's lying in his bed and realizes that he can no longer hear Fawkes singing. Harry is truly alone...or is he?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3846; Read Count: 817; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/09/2005; Published: 09/09/2005
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
09/14/2005
that was so great you are such a gifted author. I just love your work ~lillyb~


Chapter 1: His Best Source of Comfort
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
10/20/2005
I loved it . I hope we see another multi-chapter story from you soon though because the way you write is so special that I miss haveing it to look forward to each week. love ya ~lillyb~


Chapter 1: His Best Source of Comfort

Harry’s been turned into a daylight vampire and was kicked out of the social circles in the wizarding world. He is now mature, powerful and something else than he was supposed to be. AU.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Dark Fiction, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3315; Read Count: 148; Completed: No

Updated: 10/04/2005; Published: 09/30/2005
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
10/11/2005
I like the way you write, and the story has good flow. I wish we had more back story but all in all good job. lillyb


Chapter 2: Chapter 2
The Crux of the Matter by mjc [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]

A Post-HBP tale of Harry's efforts to prepare to face Voldemort for the final time. His quest spans the globe as he acquires the skills and objects he needs to finish off Voldemort for good. He learns that he is not alone and true friends are worth their weight in gold. Rated to be safe. Several character deaths.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 113068; Read Count: 21367; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/18/2009; Published: 10/13/2005
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
11/19/2005
I love it, great story. Every once and a while though it felt a little rushed. Also it seems a little to easy sometimes. But your story is so well planed and your ideas are so sharp.


Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

This fic is Post-OotP. It was only slightly AU when I started it but has become increasingly so since the release of HBP. Harry develops amazing powers in this story. Return of the Potters features vampires, Death Eater attacks, pranks, romance, action, drama, some angst, more than a little fluff and the return of three characters thought to be dead. I also want to say that under NO circumstances will and deaths that occur in HBP take place in this fic. Enjoy!



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6169; Read Count: 1340; Completed: No

Updated: 12/14/2005; Published: 10/25/2005
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
11/14/2005
I dont know about the magical number thing and some things seem a little sinple but other than that I like it. I'll be checking back though.


Chapter 1: Inheritance
Traditions by Jorgie [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Harry experiences a new side of the Weasley men and during this outing, they help him understand fully that Ginny is no more protected with out him then she is with him. Takes place just before Bill and Fleur’s wedding.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: Can You Picture This (CLOSED)
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5405; Read Count: 429; Completed: Yes

Updated: 10/25/2005; Published: 10/25/2005
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
11/02/2005
loved it, verry cute, maroon pygmy puff, perfect

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my maroon pygmy puff and my story thanks for reading but more importantly thanks for reviewing it really means a lot.



Chapter 1: Traditions
You met Allesandra Quartermaine in A New Darkness. She was introduced as Harry Potter's mother in law. But in this story, Harry Potter is not in it. This is about Allesandra's life. How she came to be the most feared, the most darkest witch of all times. Read her adventures, her triumphs, her loss and sorrows. Learn about her quest for immortality and how she came across the Amulet of Corrisa. Learn about the reign of fear and terror that surpasses everyone. Open the pages and truly see Allesandra Quartermaine.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction, General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fiction, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 23433; Read Count: 572; Completed: No

Updated: 05/15/2006; Published: 02/10/2006
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
02/19/2006
I like it, smart work.


Chapter 1: Prologue: Death, Destruction, And The Origins Of A Dark Witch
FeatureThe hunt for the Horcruxes begins. Harry has to decide who to trust as he moves closer to fulfilling his destiny. Will he be able to find and destroy all the Horcruxes? And at what price? Will he be able to find the strength within himself – the Power the Dark Lord Knows Not – in order to succeed in vanquishing Voldemort? And…can he do it and still get the girl? Join Harry and his faithful friends on their quest to finally defeat a Dark Lord.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Violence
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 285079; Read Count: 61136; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/11/2006; Published: 02/25/2006
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
05/09/2006
that was great I am starting to love where your going with this.


Author's Response: Thanks!  I\'m pleased you\'re enjoying it. There will be more coming up shortly.



Chapter 8: An Uneasy Alliance
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
04/24/2006

 Smart work, but I hope this is not where J.K. is going. I have avoided reading Harry is the Horcrux storys in the past because I find the idea so dark. But because its you Ill hang in there. I love the way you write so its worth it no matter the outcome. But I hope you know that now I have to go to work and face real life and try not to start crying while I am reading an Elmo book to my class.

~lillyb~ 



Author's Response: Oh, don\'t be sad!  There\'s plenty of more twists and turns to go before we get to that final battle. Malfoy makes his appearance in the next chapter, and we haven\'t even started hunting Horcruxes yet.  By making that reveal so early, it gives Harry a chance to explore the "dead man walking" idea - and gives Hermione more time to think of something ;)



Chapter 6: Godric's Hollow