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Very well done. I haven't read a lot of Ginny in the first person and the emotions certainly fit how a sixteen year old would feel having such a big responsibility dumped on them.
The twins delight in making their mother flush during a Weasley family outing.
*squee* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
Year 6 AU. H/G; R/Hr. Sirius Black is dead, Lord Voldemort failed to learn the entirety of the Prophecy of his defeat, Dolores Umbridge was chased from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and Harry Potter departed once again for 4 Privet Drive. But just because school has ended for summer doesn't mean the war has.
Harry and Ginny must deal with unforseen consequences of the Chamber of Secrets while Fudge plots to control the Boy Who Lived and break the Order of the Phoenix. Fudge's machinations leave Harry cut off from the wizarding world and at the mercy of an out-of-control Vernon Dursley.
And while the wizarding world fights over the fate of the Boy Who Lived, Voldemort awakes forbidden, forgotten Lore to wage his war on the wizarding world.
An excellent start; I find the characterization excellent, and the starting tension makes me eager to continue. Excellent job.
Coming from you, 'excellent characterization' is high praise! Thanks for reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
An excellent chapter. The imagery is vivid and compelling, and the final twist at the end is unexpected and has great potential. I look forward to the next chapter.
Thanks! I hope the next chapter is as entertaining - it sets the stage for Harry's long summer.
Harry and Ron have a very delightful afternoon together.
Ginny discovers that Harry not only cheated on her during the Second Wizarding War but that Hermione was the one to instigate it--and what's worse, has the gall to criticise her for being upset about it!