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Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/28/2005
The metamorphosis is beginning. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, Harry is beginning to find his strength. I'm glad you liked it.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/28/2005
At least Harry is a fast learner and has something worth fighting for. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, Harry is finally realizing that he has a lot worth fighting for...:) And with that realization, the door opens to powers that he never realized he had.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/28/2005
Excellent sorting hat song. Hopefully someone will listen, but I can't see any alliance with the ferret. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Nope, there will be no alliances with ferrets, I'm afraid. :(



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/28/2005
Good visual descriptions of the training, and of the relationship between Harry and Ginny growing in real and meaningful ways. I'm looking forward to Chapter 24.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had a very hard time with this chapter. :) I like how Ginny seems to know what Harry needs most of the time, and unlike the other two, she helps him, even if it irritates him.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/29/2005
The sky was pregant, eh? This is certainly starting off with some hopeful foreshadowing.

Would Harry think of Draco as a blonde? I'd think more like Slytherin git. It was refreshing to see him pancake into the ground... though he should have had to play like that.

Good backstory bits from Remus, and I liked how Harry handled his question, and very enjoyable to see Harry join forces with Ginny against Hermione, and unlike Ron, she was willing to let him pick up the tab.

I love the gentle way you show Ginny supporting Harry, syuch as saying Voldemort's name, and Harry claiming her as his.

Well done.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, Charles! :) I already edited Harry's thoughts of Draco as a blonde...I agree completely. I really liked pancaking Draco - that was the most fun I have had since I started writing this monstrosity of a fic. I'm glad, also, that you liked the backstory. I like to add in the Marauder bits when a chance presesnts itself. As for Ginny, with all the trauma that is going on, they are getting closer than ever.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
07/05/2005
The scene were Dumbledore told the order was superbly done. Molly reading the riot act to Albus was excellent... and overdue.

Introspective Dumbledore was also very much in character and believable. You have managed to get into Dumbledore's head in a very convincing fashion.

And the final scene was very well done. Only thing missing was a bit of fluff with Ginny, which will hopefully be taken care of in 26.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Molly's rant...I've been planning that one for about about 12 chapters now! I'm so relieved that you think DD works well - that was probably the single hardest part of the chapter to write. As for fluff...yes, Ch. 26 actually begins with it. :) Thanks as always for your kind review, and I'll talk to you soon!



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
07/06/2005
The first scene was quite good; the detail was believable and well constructed and logical in keeping with what we know of how magic works. The plotting in the background and the final twist of Kingsley encouraging Harry to spend some with Ginny was well done.

Ginny's interaction with Ron was great... it's good to see one of 'em knows what's important. Was there a bit of forshadowing here?

The next seen with Ginny was superbly done. Is there foreshadowing here, too? That what Harry needs to tap isn't anger...

And then we end with more foreshadowing. Very well done!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, Charles...it sure was a booger to write! :) There is lots and lots of foreshadowing happening here, but I won't say anything else. And you're right - anger is not what Harry needs to focus on.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
07/11/2005
The scene with Harry, Dumbledore and Ron was quite interesting, showing how Harry had grown past Ron and was beginning to move in different and more adult circles. Ron never seems to learn.

Harry is becoming more and more isolated, and this doesn't look good. Hopefully he'll pay attention to what Ginny told him before there's a price.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
07/28/2005
A good chapter with a lot of backstory. Draco certainly cows easily.


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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
07/24/2005
Long chapters are good. I liked how Harry dealt with Dudders, and the setup for the martial arts training. And it was good seeing Umbridge and Fudge get their dues... a much better transfer of power than in canon.


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