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Hateful Love by Perenelle [Young Teens]
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Hermione hates Ron and is ranting to Harry abou how much she hates him. look at the tital it explain all you need to know from here. I was reading Romeo and Juliet when I wrote it and I was also really mad at someone.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 594; Read Count: 491; Completed: No

Updated: 05/05/2005; Published: 05/05/2005
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
05/09/2005
I think you've got a good plot bunny here, and I'd like to see it deveoped further. There's more story to be told here that you actually tell.


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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
This is a great opening chapter, very much in the Rowling style. The handling of Vernon was quite well done, and quite believable following the events at the end of OotP.

Author's Response: cts, your reviews mean a lot to me! :) I'm glad you like the first chapter, and to stay it is in the Rowling style is the best compliment I could get.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
Good development of plot and character. The only thing that struck me as a bit off was Vernon calling Harry "Potter". Would have seemed more like Vernon if he'd said "Boy". Looking forward to see where you take this.

Author's Response: That's not the first time I have had that comment. I think I am going to change that line.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
In this chapter you manage to tug on the emtions very effectively. It was heartbreaking in places. I thought Lupin was handled especally well.

Author's Response: Thanks! At this point, I don't think Lupin could stand to lose anyone else...Harry is all he has left.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
A very well done and emotional chapter. I thought it was telling while everyone else was reacting to the Dursleys and their mistreatment, Ginny moved past all of that and got to the one thing that mattered: "Where is he?"

Author's Response: Yep, Ginny is VERY good at getting to the heart of the matter where Harry is concerned...and that will come in handy later on.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
I liked this. While it was not as action packed or dramatic as a couple of the preceeding chapters, it does provide some very necessary background and framing. And Ginny is telegraphing her hand.

Author's Response: Oooh, but she is, isn't she?



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
I wouldn't have been surprised to have found Molly with her ear glued to the door. Overall, very much in character.

Author's Response: :) Yes, Molly is fairly bursting with worry and curiosity, but FOR NOW, she remains deferential to Dumbledore's leadership.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
"We love you."? Ginny keeps missing with the pronouns... and Molly let Dumbledore off much too lightly.

Author's Response: Ah, you're right, Ginny messes up her pronouns...and there is a reason for it. She's not very good at hiding things, is she? As for Molly...Dumbledore has it coming to him. Wait until Chapter 24!



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
The interplay between Lupin and Harry is excellent, though Harry seems very accepting of all this. Hopefully he'll be up to pushing back a little soon. Your handling of Ginny is also well done. A good read.

Author's Response: Harry will not be accepting of it forever - right now he is simply too emotionally spent to care about almost anything. Between Sirius' death and everything that has happened sense, I don't see him as having much room left for emotion.



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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
06/27/2005
I liked the interplay between Ron and Ginny. Now that she has cast the die, I look forward to see it happen.

Author's Response: Harry and Ginny move more slowly in my fic than in many others...but it will happen, believe it! :)



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