Real name: Amelia
Member Since: 01/06/07
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Written for the Sci-Fi prompt of the May Challenge.
The tale of a boy who slowly finds himself alone.
I liked this, is was really cool! A spin-off exploring further into this world would be really great- the world and story has alot of potential. You actually leave alot of questions (is he the last person? where exactly did the others go? why did his parents stay behind? what happened to the world?) You were artfully vague- you make the reader just as..miffed as the character, which is a great way to draw in the reader, and make the character memorable to them. Something more to answer our questions I think would be well received. Good Job!
Thanks for the review!
YEEEAH!! I'm glad that you were able to feel the emotion in this fic. It gives me a sort of confidence boost to know that the sadness I was hoping would come through the fic, did!
I hope your mom enjoys the hug!
Thanks so much!
In a world where darkness rules, and Humans, Pixies, Centaurs and Forest Maidens are forced into slavery, there seems to be no hope for those who are deemed weak, and lead a life of suffering.
One girl wants to change all that, and hopes to lead a revolution against The Leader, and all his beliefs. But she cannot do it if she doesn't understand her own kind, and what she, and everyone else, wants.
Will she create a better, fairer life for everyone? Or will she just make things worse? After all, all she has to go on are the words of stories, which no one knows are true...
Thank you! :D
You'll find out at the begining of the next chapter. :)
Thank you so much for the kind review. I'm glad you liked the character I am love/hate with it at times. Your comment is deeply appreciated.
That song calls me. Am I human? Maybe. No one knows. No one knows that it's me - me that takes the children. No one knows where they go.
They just vanish.
I only came a short while ago. But it's been enough time.
Why do you fear me so? The same reason you fear the dark. The same reason you fear that strange noise outside your window.
Because you can't see me. You can't stop me.
So here is the story of a few of my memorable victims. Read it, if you must, and make up your own mind on what I am, and where they go...
lol, that's the effect I wanted! :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
While on a German trip with her students, Elizabeth Conlon is delighted to discover an important historical source.
She emails her boss straight away with the details, and a typed up copy of the diary of an unknown Nazi.
This diary tells the story of the rise of Hitler, and even the beginnings of the Second World War. While she searches for the rest, come, and read the beginning.
The story of how it all started.
The reasons why they voted for Hitler.
*First in The Second Story series, which follows Elizabeth as she discovers more about the author of the diary, as well as many other, previously untold stories, from all sorts of era's.*
I am very interested in the second world war and also in the rise of Hitler. I find it so fascinating how such an evil man came to power, but I find that everyone just assumes that every single German of the time was evil. They wern't, they were brainwashed. A lot of them were evil, but many had no choice in the matter.
I'm glad you liked it! :D