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Real name: Anasuya
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Liquid Library by Naga [General]
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Ana, a young woman so recently in a fight with her roommate, wanders into a nondescript building in efforts to ease her flustered mind. What she finds is something at once wonderous and frightening: a library...of sorts.


Categories: Horror Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2417; Read Count: 727; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/02/07; Published: 01/02/07
Reviewer: suya (Signed)
01/02/07

I thought it was fantastic. I thought your main character was dynamic and developed well, even in this short piece.

The plot was very creative; it touches on our more primal fears of secrets and conpriracies but with a horrifying twist dealing with knowledge, how we learn and our capacity for knowledge.

The only quibbly thing I noticed was that the beginning was a bit rushed. I think your character's unhappiness could have been fleshed out a bit more, but it doesn't take away from the story.

And I have to mention that my favourite line was, "It's only heroin for the nerdy." I thought that was brilliant.

Overall, a great story from a great author.  

 

 

 




Chapter 1: Liquid Library