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A young woman finds herself tangled in the technicalities of religion where everything she believed about Heaven and Hell changes in just one final breath.

Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 12355; Read Count: 1827; Completed: No

Updated: 10/03/09; Published: 10/08/07
Reviewer: julianne (Signed)
30/03/09

Ah, I'm so glad you've started posting chapters again!  It's such a unique story line and your characters are absolutely fascinating.  I look forward to seeing what comes next!



Author's Response:

Chapter 6 is already in the making and I have finally got around to mapping the end of the story so more chapters should be up soon...depending on if I can get a minute to write while I finish up school. Thank you for the review!!




Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Two friends race down a mountain when day turns to night and the warm sun gives way to an icy moon.



Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1255; Read Count: 432; Completed: Yes

Updated: 10/03/09; Published: 10/03/09
Reviewer: julianne (Signed)
30/03/09

You could almost feel the cold seeping out of the screen and into the air around you.  And that makes me wish I had a sweater right about now!

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad my description was able to reach you :) Stay warm :)




Chapter 1: Ice Cold
The Promise Ring by LadyMortis [Young Teen]
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It was the last straw!

Anadel and Noraalei are as close as any siblings can be, but when Anadel fails to follow society's standards, her mother banishes her from the kingdom until she cleans up her act, and can be the princess she needs to be.



Categories: Fantasy Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2229; Read Count: 539; Completed: Yes

Updated: 30/03/09; Published: 30/03/09
Reviewer: julianne (Signed)
30/03/09

You've done a terrific job of grabbing your reader from the first word.  It's a violent and vivid image that pulls you in to the world you've created.  I look forward to seeing what happens to Anadel.




Chapter 1: The Promise Ring
Dragon's Claw by Tigarus [Young Adult]
[Reviews - 1]

A village destroyed by an unstoppable force. A survivor finds shelter in unlikely company. Old foes are confronted and the differences between man and beast are put to the ultimate test.



Categories: Fantasy Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: Dragon's Claw - Chapter 2
Word count: 4695; Read Count: 9; Completed: No

Updated: 14/05/09; Published: 06/04/09
Reviewer: julianne (Signed)
14/05/09

I'm intrigued by the world you have created here.  The idea of a dual nature within a person - or being, I guess I should say - is fascinating.




Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Hidden Truth by ElusiveEvan [Young Teen]
[Reviews - 1]

An agent, a boy, a hope. Dragged into a world beyond his clear concise logic, what happens to someone trained to operate on logic alone? A story of love, of intrigue and conspiracy, a story of the paranormal, of music and of teenagers awaits you.



Categories: Fantasy Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2208; Read Count: 507; Completed: No

Updated: 16/04/09; Published: 15/04/09
Reviewer: julianne (Signed)
16/04/09

Very intriguing!  There's just enough detail to grab your attention and draw you in but equally enough mystery to keep the reader wanting more.

I look forward to seeing what happens next!




Chapter 1: Testing, way too much testing.