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Ah, I'm so glad you've started posting chapters again! It's such a unique story line and your characters are absolutely fascinating. I look forward to seeing what comes next!
Chapter 6 is already in the making and I have finally got around to mapping the end of the story so more chapters should be up soon...depending on if I can get a minute to write while I finish up school. Thank you for the review!!
You could almost feel the cold seeping out of the screen and into the air around you. And that makes me wish I had a sweater right about now!
Thank you so much! I'm glad my description was able to reach you :) Stay warm :)
It was the last straw!
Anadel and Noraalei are as close as any siblings can be, but when Anadel fails to follow society's standards, her mother banishes her from the kingdom until she cleans up her act, and can be the princess she needs to be.
You've done a terrific job of grabbing your reader from the first word. It's a violent and vivid image that pulls you in to the world you've created. I look forward to seeing what happens to Anadel.
A village destroyed by an unstoppable force. A survivor finds shelter in unlikely company. Old foes are confronted and the differences between man and beast are put to the ultimate test.
I'm intrigued by the world you have created here. The idea of a dual nature within a person - or being, I guess I should say - is fascinating.
An agent, a boy, a hope. Dragged into a world beyond his clear concise logic, what happens to someone trained to operate on logic alone? A story of love, of intrigue and conspiracy, a story of the paranormal, of music and of teenagers awaits you.
Very intriguing! There's just enough detail to grab your attention and draw you in but equally enough mystery to keep the reader wanting more.
I look forward to seeing what happens next!