Member Since: 02/02/07
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I like the subtle references to fandoms outside of the norm in your story, and the deliberate manner of your main character. She's got spunk, and class, a very rare combination, and something difficult to pull off, but you've done it beautifully. I'm really impressed.
In addition to that, you've got a very realistic scene set here, and Ryan is particularly delicious. An admirable answer to a challenge.