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The Appeal of a Corset by Naga [Young Adult]
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Janis is hell-bent on finding out who the trollop is that has been cheating with her boyfriend.  When she walks into a downtown gothic club in full costume, she catches the eye of a regular, and begins to wonder if revenge is really all that important.

Categories: Romance Fiction, May Challenge; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2268; Read Count: 248; Completed: Yes

Updated: 22/05/07; Published: 22/05/07
Reviewer: lamia (Signed)
02/06/07

I like the subtle references to fandoms outside of the norm in your story, and the deliberate manner of your main character. She's got spunk, and class, a very rare combination, and something difficult to pull off, but you've done it beautifully. I'm really impressed.

 

In addition to that, you've got a very realistic scene set here, and Ryan is particularly delicious. An admirable answer to a challenge. 




Chapter 1: The Appeal of a Corset