Penname: LadyMortis [Contact]
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Member Since: 02/02/07
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Lady Mortis loves to spend her time writing, reading, studying ancient cultures (not that she knows any yet) and trying to make heads or tails of latin.

 She is most fascinated by the inner workings of her imagination and so she writes some fantastical, if not bizaare stories.

Lady Mortis also loves to dabble in stories involving the occult, the paranormal, real life problems (divorce, abortion, suicide, depression), death, romance, and some humour/satire (I try a bit but I'm not very good in that department)

Anyways, Lady Mortis bids you welcome and wishes that you enjoy her imagination.

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Gangs by apollo13 [Young Teen]
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This is a story that almost every teenage girl can relate to. This is the story of a girl who strives to be popular, but hates the popular people.

At first, it was harmless. At first, it could be passed of as a playground fight. At first, she was hurting peoples feelings.

At first, it didn't matter. But one night, in the quiet streets of her home town in England,  Becky takes things too far...

Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 10841; Read Count: 9332; Completed: No

Updated: 01/03/09; Published: 26/07/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

oooooh... this sounds interesting. I am really looking forward to more

Lady M

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad it's interesting. ;)


Chapter 2: Auditions
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

okay, this is already getting out of hand and Becky is in way over her head :D Good job

Lady M

Author's Response:

Yup, she is - and the main plot has barely started yet!


Chapter 3: Orange Light
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
I am angry... So very angry with Becky for being so weak and poor Amy. This was a really good chapter. Can't wait to read more

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, Becky is a bit weak, isn't she?


Chapter 4: Vandals
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)


once again, this was a good chapter and it was gripping but evil cliffy.... thank god I have been gone so long that now I can go see what happens.

 I can't wait to find out. Good job

Author's Response: thanks!! I'll probably update soon!!

Chapter 5: The Box Office
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

Oh no!!!

 I like the mystery girl... (alot more than the other characters)

Anyway, I thought you did a good job once again... YOu just have the <i> </i> things showing.... I hope it doesn't italicize on me......

 Seriously though, you did a really good job with all your characters and I can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Gah, stupid tags!!


Thank you so much!!

Chapter 6: Blood on Your Hands
An entire world exists that we are un-aware of. Unfortunatly, a rather simple girl is about to be lured into it.

Categories: Horror Fiction, July Challenge; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1391; Read Count: 742; Completed: Yes

Updated: 29/07/07; Published: 29/07/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

Okay, I will tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed it despite the girl's demise and I wish it had been drawn out a little more but your style was effective and you got your point across... Good Job....

 P.S. Do we get to learn more about Ezlener??

Author's Response:

Thank you! This was meant as a drabble, so I didn't want it to be very long. I'm hoping to do a full length something with Ezlener though.


Chapter 1: Chapter 1
She reflects on the good times and the bad times and what she loved and lost, and the park has been there to see it all.

Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1228; Read Count: 711; Completed: Yes

Updated: 07/08/07; Published: 02/08/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

wow. This was simply amazing. I did not see this ending and wow. It was incredibly done. Awesome Job

Lady M

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad I kept the element of surprise the whole way through, thank you again.

Chapter 1: The Park
A young woman finds herself tangled in the technicalities of religion where everything she believed about Heaven and Hell changes in just one final breath.

Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 12355; Read Count: 1827; Completed: No

Updated: 10/03/09; Published: 10/08/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

Hmmm, it is an intriguing beginning. It did seem a very strange encounter and I am curious to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad it made you curious because this chapter bores me, then again, I do what happens next :)

Chapter 1: Prologue
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

Man, Candice is not having a good couple of days.

I just wanted to point out that you called her Kira a couple times in the story and I don't know if that was done on purpose or not. Anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter as well.

Good job so far

Author's Response:

I know, poor Candice..

And I am totally and completely embarassed by the Kira thing, it was my original name for the main character and it slipped in and out a lot during that chapter, I thought I had switched them all back but I missed two! thanks for pointing that out.

thanks for the review.

Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

Oh boy. Talk about truly being divided. I don't think I could ever deal with that kind of situation. It was a good chapter, very suspenseful and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Author's Response: This is my favorite chapter so far, and maybe even of the whole story, it was fun to write but also really emotionally draining, I almost wanted to cry at the end. But thank you for the review!

Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Humans tend to see the world in terms of black and white, dark and light. In the cold of autumn, twelve-year-old Simon must learn to get past that blindness and face his fears the hard way.

Categories: Horror Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1803; Read Count: 745; Completed: Yes

Updated: 14/09/07; Published: 12/09/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

I thought this was very well composed. It was very realistic and I thought your description of the absolute fear that simon felt was perfect!

Good Job

 Lady M

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Chapter 1: The Graveyard
Broken by coppercurls [Young Teen]
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Luke and his sister find a confusing girl on their return home one night. It is obvious that she needs help, yet the help she needs may be something even greater or more difficult than Luke can give.

"We found her in the shadow of a dumpster, thown away like last week's trash, withering and beginning to smell. At first I thought she was just a pile of rags thrown together, an undersized scarecrow."

Categories: Fantasy Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2879; Read Count: 804; Completed: Yes

Updated: 22/12/07; Published: 05/12/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)


This was an incredible piece of fiction. The way your portrayed her fear and the power behind the emotions was awesome

 You did an amazing job.

Chapter 1: Broken
The Ghost by MaiaMadness [Young Teen]
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Upon the tragic death of her mother, fourteen-year-old Elyse is forced to move to live with her father, at his great estate in the country. But Mr Lyndon is a bad-tempered man with little patience for young girls, and his estate is as secretive as he is, filled with riddles, mysteries and ghosts.

Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2418; Read Count: 1975; Completed: No

Updated: 05/05/08; Published: 20/12/07
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)

Ohhh, I am definately enjoying this story so far. The Cliffhanger was disappointing but only cause i wanted to read more.

THe suspense in the piece makes it absolutely gripping and i am excited to read more. Good job

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing!I'm glad you liked it. Sorry about the cliffhanger... At first the story sort of ended there and sat for almost two years, but I'm getting somewhere now. :)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1