Member Since: 01/02/07
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This is just_the_contrary on MNFF, if anyone's wondering.
My name is Jenn and I love to write!
Oh my goodness. I don't read much horror, but when I do, I seem to love it.
One of my biggest fears is being trapped somewhere, so this story was utterly terrifying for me. The premise of the liquid books is very original and intriguing, and how you can get high on them is such an incredible idea. If someone could drink many of them at once, mixed perhaps, I can see how that could be possible.
The nurse, for me, was the creepiest part. I always get creeped out by the last sentece, and yours was satistyingly creepy. She starts Ana off into her doomed life of getting high off books, being tested to see how much brain she can use - with Pride and Prejudice.
I loved it. What a great way to start off your site!
This story is extremely captivating. I love second-person POV, and rarely get to read it because it's not often written. I loved this, and I really felt as if I was in the story, and that was me.
I also love how you talk about religion. I'm not Christian, but it's interesting how contrary to all I've been hearing, the preist (I think) was stragely supportive of the protagonist. I think that's lovely.
You should be very proud of yourself for writing this. Amazing job.