Penname: sierraquill1715 [Contact]
Real name: Anushka Chalakal
Member Since: 04/01/08
Membership status: Member

I'm just me.... luv to read and write! =P



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Dad left Mom. Mom was fine. Mom met Paul. Mom married Paul. I was fine. I met Kimberley.

...Stepsisters aren't all that bad, you know.



Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3919; Read Count: 1051; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/02/07; Published: 02/02/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/01/08
Heh heh.... lol ^ ^ its light humoured & sweet!!!! =D

Author's Response: Thanks! :)



Chapter 1: Chocolate Night
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Katheryn Marlow has been condemned a heretic and a Witch, to suffer and be burned at the stake upon St. Valentine's Day. In the small hours of the night, as she contemplates her fate, Katheryn receives an unexpected visitor who brings a gift most precious.

Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1881; Read Count: 287; Completed: Yes

Updated: 13/02/07; Published: 13/02/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
27/04/08
Beautifully written..... and curiously told.


Chapter 1: Thy Gentle Loving Friend
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When teenager Cassie Sherman gives up her infant daughter, she never dreams that they will one day meet again. Circumstances and perhaps a touch of a higher power, however, dictate differently...but can she find her daughter in time to save her life?



Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1346; Read Count: 282; Completed: No

Updated: 09/03/07; Published: 09/03/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/01/08
Oh wow! Update quick pleese!


Chapter 1: Prologue
Crystal Fantasy by LadyMortis [Young Teen]
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Sometimes, when I close my eyes, I am in another place, another time; a place where the constant hardships of life cannot interrupt the calm serenity of my fantasy.

A woman, suffering the many hardships of life, has become cynical of humanity and all it entails. Caught in the endless terrors the world seems to conjure, she is beginning to lose faith in man. Then she meets Keiran.

"Your tears bring hope that one day, enough tears will have been shed to end this seeming eternal war"

Keiran, the wind sage of Utopia, is a figment of her imagination. Yet as their relationship strengthens and grows, she begins to wonder where the line is that seperates reality and fantasy and if it can be blurred until they are one and the same.



Categories: July Challenge, Fantasy Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3015; Read Count: 995; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/07/07; Published: 06/07/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/01/08
You bet!!!! It was beautiful =)


Chapter 1: Hope, Faith and Love
Gangs by apollo13 [Young Teen]
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This is a story that almost every teenage girl can relate to. This is the story of a girl who strives to be popular, but hates the popular people.

At first, it was harmless. At first, it could be passed of as a playground fight. At first, she was hurting peoples feelings.

At first, it didn't matter. But one night, in the quiet streets of her home town in England,  Becky takes things too far...



Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 10841; Read Count: 9278; Completed: No

Updated: 01/03/09; Published: 26/07/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
04/01/08
Hey... I like the descriptions =)

Author's Response: Thank you, I like writing descriptions. :)



Chapter 2: Auditions
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
04/01/08
Hey... that was good--- !

Author's Response: Thanks



Chapter 3: Orange Light
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
27/04/08
Ooh.... hey... that was smart writing..... update quick!!

Author's Response: Well, I keep trying, but I'm just getting sent blank rejection letters. Annoying, no?



Chapter 6: Blood on Your Hands
Water and Fire by apollo13 [General]
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In a world where darkness rules, and Humans, Pixies, Centaurs and Forest Maidens are forced into slavery, there seems to be no hope for those who are deemed weak, and lead a life of suffering.

One girl wants to change all that, and hopes to lead a revolution against The Leader, and all his beliefs. But she cannot do it if she doesn't understand her own kind, and what she, and everyone else, wants.

Will she create a better, fairer life for everyone? Or will she just make things worse? After all, all she has to go on are the words of stories, which no one knows are true...



Categories: Fantasy Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5215; Read Count: 3264; Completed: No

Updated: 28/08/07; Published: 31/07/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
04/01/08
Mmmmmmm update.... these are too short to comment on =O...............

Author's Response:

Yeah, I've hit a bit of a road block for this one - don't worry, I'm working on it!

~Evie




Chapter 3: Things Will Change One Day
Ten Green Bottles by apollo13 [Young Teen]
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That song calls me. Am I human? Maybe. No one knows. No one knows that it's me - me that takes the children. No one knows where they go.

They just vanish.

I only came a short while ago. But it's been enough time.

Why do you fear me so? The same reason you fear the dark. The same reason you fear that strange noise outside your window.

Because you can't see me. You can't stop me.

So here is the story of a few of my memorable victims. Read it, if you must, and make up your own mind on what I am, and where they go...



Categories: Horror Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2505; Read Count: 661; Completed: Yes

Updated: 16/08/07; Published: 15/08/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/03/08
Omigawd... amazingly disturbing ^_^ I lyk it!!!

Author's Response: Lol, danke. :)



Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/03/08
oh hey wanted to write some more about it... my 14 year old bro keeps asking me what happened to the kids... lol.... i definitely agree with all the previous reviewers... u've presented the opening scene amazing well! It's soo---- image-ey... lol... spookie!

Author's Response:

Hee hee - I don't think even I know what's happening to all the kids - I changed my mind sop many times, from cheesy happy endings to really disturbing endings, but none of them worked, so I thought I'd let you wonder. ;)

 

~Evie




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Humans tend to see the world in terms of black and white, dark and light. In the cold of autumn, twelve-year-old Simon must learn to get past that blindness and face his fears the hard way.

Categories: Horror Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1803; Read Count: 745; Completed: Yes

Updated: 14/09/07; Published: 12/09/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
27/04/08
Oh... that is soo FANTASTIC!!! Sleepwalking huh? So well written!!1

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!



Chapter 1: The Graveyard
Love and Lies by apollo13 [Young Adult]
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Liliana is only ten years old, and she's preparing to go into a "posh grammar school". This is her story of her parents divorce, and the marriage, or rather, lie, that preceeded it.

It accounts the innocent view of a child watching the break-up of a false relationship through un-blemished eyes, on a rough council estate, where families are deemed "hopeless" and "not worth the trouble".

With an alcoholic mother and unfaithful father, Liliana desperately seeks for real love in a cruel world which makes no sense.



Categories: General Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1525; Read Count: 268; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/10/07; Published: 03/10/07
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/01/08
Heh heh ... its cute... but its got potential to be a full storieee....

Author's Response: LOL - I don't know much about divorce, so I don't think I'll go there!!



Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wendy Larsen curls up with a good book on Christmas Eve and realizes that all stories don't end happily ever after.

Categories: Romance Fiction; Characters: None; Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4289; Read Count: 126; Completed: Yes

Updated: 17/02/08; Published: 21/01/08
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
15/03/08

Awwww.... soee sweet! Just the way it should have been... then not @ all.... oh i luvd d way u wrote it.... its perfect!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It sounds like you got the point of the story, I was worried people wouldn't.




Chapter 1: Learning to Live Again