Reviews For The Ghost

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Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
17/01/08 - 09:49 am

Ohhh, I am definately enjoying this story so far. The Cliffhanger was disappointing but only cause i wanted to read more.

THe suspense in the piece makes it absolutely gripping and i am excited to read more. Good job

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing!I'm glad you liked it. Sorry about the cliffhanger... At first the story sort of ended there and sat for almost two years, but I'm getting somewhere now. :)

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Reviewer: apollo13 (Signed)
24/12/07 - 06:04 am

Oooooh, spooky! I could actually feel goosebumps rise on my arms just then. ;)

The relationship between the girl and her father is really interesting, I'd love to read more!



Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! My first review ever on this site! :) More is coming eventually. Tried to write a little just today, but I'm just not inspired right now... Thanks for reviewing!

Chapter 1
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