Ohhh, I am definately enjoying this story so far. The Cliffhanger was disappointing but only cause i wanted to read more.
THe suspense in the piece makes it absolutely gripping and i am excited to read more. Good job
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing!I'm glad you liked it. Sorry about the cliffhanger... At first the story sort of ended there and sat for almost two years, but I'm getting somewhere now. :)