Wow,

This was an incredible piece of fiction. The way your portrayed her fear and the power behind the emotions was awesome

 You did an amazing job.

Wow, that was stunning! A dark, mysterious piece of work, which is beautifully crafted. It reminds me a lot of Phillip Paulman's His Dark Materials. Your descriptions at the start of the story really caught my eye and drew me in. Excellent job, I look forward to reading more from you - is there a sequel planned for this?

~Evie