Reviews For Love and Lies

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Reviewer: Celtic_Jewel (Signed)
21/03/08 - 03:40 pm

Hey Evie! I love this story, very sad, but true to a lot of teens out there...

 -Ema



Author's Response:

Ema!!!!!!!!! **huggles** Thank you dearie!

~Evie




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Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/01/08 - 08:49 am
Heh heh ... its cute... but its got potential to be a full storieee....

Author's Response: LOL - I don't know much about divorce, so I don't think I'll go there!!



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Reviewer: thecrimsonwhisperer (Signed)
12/10/07 - 07:57 pm
*cough* I can read story summaries...she is 10 years old. Though that still doesn't help me decide whether I like the way the story was told.

Author's Response:

:p heh heh. I don't mind if you hate it - it was quite different to my usual style. :)

~Evie




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Reviewer: thecrimsonwhisperer (Signed)
12/10/07 - 05:25 pm

Man, you crank out stories like there is no tomorrow, maybe someday I'll get around to reading them all, for now though I'll just take a glance when I see something intriguing.

I wasn't sure whether I liked this style of writing or not, it was realistic but not at the same time. Because while she did get into grammar school (how old is she by the way?) she used some big words (which might work but someone that uses such big words I don't think would censor themselves in the middle of their narrative). But I don't even know how old she is so it's hard to say.

However the content was very interesting. My parents actually are divorced and their marriage was based on a lie too...I never had thought of it like that before but it was. Additionally their divorce came as a huge surprise to me and I was crushed at first but happy because once my dad moved out things were that much better with them apart /tmi. So I enjoyed her realistic-ness (surely not a word) about the whole thing...most of the time you get some messed up kid and too much drama but this was simpler, I enjoyed it.

I used to be able to give much more critiquing reviews, I'm sorry to have failed you as of late. But your stories are wonderful and I'm in awe at how fast you are able to think of them, I envy you.



Author's Response:

heh heh - thanks. :) I just have too many ideas for my own good. :)

Well, she sensors them because she is, quite simply, an innocent child, who doesn't like anything bad or wrong - like lies or swear words.

I come from a secure family, so I'm not sure whether I did this very well, but it is loosely based on a friend of mine, who bounced into school one day, broadly grinning, and said, "My mum and Dad are getting a divorce - finally!"

I appreciate that that is not everyone's experiance, and most kid's are distraught, but this is just one story. :)

Thank you for your comments! :D

~Evie




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