Very intersting. It was well written- it sounded like a real journal entry. Any gaps, for example, what made him change his mind about the nazis, are explained by the missing bits in the journal. Its actually really sad- he dies 5 years from the time this chapter ends. Well, the whole era was sad really- what made you choose to write about it? Its well written,you did very well. I wish I could sound a little more hyped, but its not a very uplifting story- that doesn't mean its not good though. As always, keep up the good work!
I am very interested in the second world war and also in the rise of Hitler. I find it so fascinating how such an evil man came to power, but I find that everyone just assumes that every single German of the time was evil. They wern't, they were brainwashed. A lot of them were evil, but many had no choice in the matter.
I'm glad you liked it! :D
Diary of Evil