Evie, that was scary. I've stopped my sisters singing that song now. *runs away and hides under the bed*

-Ema :p 

I absolutely adored this story. It was written very well! I liked the simple style, as well as the different sections telling about each abduction.

My favorite thing, though, about it as a whole is how eerie and addicting the beginning is, and how, gradually, the settings of the abductions become less eerie but still so dangerous. Honestly, the beginning was what hooked me... The imagery was perfect, and I had this incredibly creepy but really vivid picture in my head of a little girl in white on these rocky cliffs, her hair blowing in the wind, and I could literally hear her childish voice singing and I got chills. And then there were the woods, an equally creepy setting. But once you get to a nursery school and a grocery store, for God's sake, you begin to feel that sense of complete hopelessness. Like the children aren't safe anywhere anymore. I loved it!

Awesome job! Though I was yearning to find out more about this monster... *shudders* Anyway, really good work.

I loved that! It felt creepy, like the feeling you get when you see Armageddon or something...I wonder just what our little snatcher is, though...

 One thing confused me.  Ashley and Ethan.  Is Ashley a boy's name? And the part with the teddy bear, you said he grabbed his sister's teddy bear.  What was that about.