Intriguing . . . very intriguing. Gotta like the mind messers. Evil sons of a ** but they do keep things interesting. Good story!
This is wonderful! I'm a fan of gore, so the image that was conveyed when Mila was ripping her own skin...the simple act, that she was hurting herself...it just made it all the more horrible!
Is there a continuation to this? Are we going to know more about Nodnol and the woman who killed Mila? Because I'd love for that to happen.
Thank you! I'm hoping to do a few more drabbles, and I'm really hoping to do a full length story about this world. Time will tell...
**shudder** You've creeped me out AGAIN - I thought that Ignorance is Bliss was bad! How you come up with such disturbing idea's, I don't know...
Like I said before, this would make a great movie. I really liked how you managed to create this story, in only a drabble. :)
Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more about this world!