Author's Response:
Yeah, I've hit a bit of a road block for this one - don't worry, I'm working on it!
~Evie
Things Will Change One Day
Reviews For Water and Fire
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
04/01/08 - 02:31 pm
Mmmmmmm update.... these are too short to comment on =O...............
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Reviewer: missgiggles316 (Signed)
01/12/07 - 04:55 pm
ooooooo! I can't wait for more! It's really great! The plot isn't like anything I've ever read. It's so cool!
Author's Response: Ooooh, thank you! :D
Author's Response: Ooooh, thank you! :D
Things Will Change One Day
Reviewer: Rynn (Signed)
14/08/07 - 04:27 am
I've seen this riddle before in Yu-Gi-Oh! If only I could remember it...but are you supposed to know who is the liar and who is the truth-teller? Because if you do, wouldn't you just ask which road was the road to happiness? Or am I missing something incredibly huge here? Sorry, I was never good with riddles! But I'd love to know the answer.
Anyay, water=poverty, if I recall correctly. This is great...I can't wait for the rebellion. I like how you're taking things slow. I don't like rushed stories, and you're doing the exact opposite, and yet not too slow. So good for you! Keep going!
Author's Response:
No, you do not know which man is which. :) I'll tell you the answer at the begining of the next chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
~Evie
Examination
Reviewer: Aohd Rose (Signed)
14/08/07 - 12:46 am
This looks really cool- it has quite a bit of potential. As to the riddle- its a cool one, but at this moment I have no idea about the answer- would you be kind and tell me? Anyway, rock on!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
You'll find out at the begining of the next chapter. :)
~Evie
Examination
Reviewer: Aohd Rose (Signed)
08/08/07 - 05:05 pm
This is a really promising beginning! I especially loved the first part- it was almost whimsical, but at the same time bitter- very well written and described. Looking forward to more, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
~Evie
Prologue
Reviewer: Rynn (Signed)
07/08/07 - 12:23 pm
This plot has really gotten my attention, Evie! I like how you went right through and introduced the main character (Grace, right?) without wasting time, even if it is a very short, and not very informative intro. This makes me hungry for more. I want to get to know Grace. The idea of water or fire, poverty or wealth, is an interesting one. Can't wait for the next chapter!
-Hadeer
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, the main character is Grace. :)
~Evie
Prologue