Woah! Nicely done! I suspected something like that, but you wrote it very well!
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Woah! Nicely done! I suspected something like that, but you wrote it very well!
oooooooh, creepy! Wow, this was really good. I kinda guessed that the little girl had been abducted, but it still had a good effect. Good job - I'd love to read more, though!
~Evie