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Reviewer: apollo13 (Signed)
31/07/07 - 10:11 am

I can't wait to read more! I love the old language you use - it adds a certain sense of mystery and magic to it.

The style of writing you use really makes me think of LOTR - an epic, mysterious type story. :)

~Evie




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Reviewer: Lady Apostrophe (Signed)
12/07/07 - 06:51 pm
Excellent! I won't write any sort of SPEW-like review since this was just the first chapter, but I do love the style and the mystery about it. I can't wait for the next installment!


The Creation
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
09/07/07 - 08:25 pm
I am intrigued by your opening to this story. If your intention was to be telling it the way a storyteller of mythology would, you did an excellent job. I am very much looking forward to reading more.


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