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Reviewer: Aohd Rose (Signed)
31/07/07 - 06:32 pm
Talk about sad! It made me want to go hug my mom! This was written really well, and you managed to convey such emotion, that the reader managed to feel it. Great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

YEEEAH!! I'm glad that you were able to feel the emotion in this fic. It gives me a sort of confidence boost to know that the sadness I was hoping would come through the fic, did! 

I hope your mom enjoys the hug!

Thanks so much!

-Mackenzie 




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Reviewer: apollo13 (Signed)
31/07/07 - 10:06 am

That's so sad! Seriously, you nearly had me in tears over it! I loved the nice little "homey" touches you added - sandwiches cut in the triangle way was pure genius.

When I first read the summary I thought this was a romance story! :o But I still love this fic. I feel so sorry for the character, he obviously had a strong relationship with his mother. I thought you brought the pain and sadness of his emotions through in the writing very well, and it was a really nice touch that there was no dialogue.

:)

~Evie



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to have gotten a review! I was hoping for it to come off as a sort of eye dabber and I'm excited that you felt what I was hoping the readers would!

 Thanks again Evie!

-Mackenzie

 




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