That was very powerful and tastefully done. I have not crossed a story quite like yours yet and found it quite unique. I want to say thank you for submitting. IT was very well done
**shudder** That's quyite creepy. Ms Briar sounds very scary. I thought you did a really good job of describing the asylum, and you handle the abuse she went through very well.
This story is very well written. I had a sort of stretched feeling throughout the whole thing. I think you really did a good job at describing what an asylum is like. The patients were very realistic and the feeling of dread lingereing everywhere was almost tangible.
I feel very... jittery now. Haha. You did a very good job!