Haha! Brilliantly romantic. I would totally be Janis, like I could see that happening to me...being totally skeptical and then the tempting exotic brunette winning me over.

I think it worked out to be totally realistic and just a smart romance story.

My only complaint would be the out of place Angelina Jolie reference I didn't think it was a very good comparison and it interrupted the flow of the story momentarily.

Other than that, fantastic, I was totally won over by this story!

What a funny and clever piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading this. Being a hopeless romantic, it was such fun reading and I was giggling my little heart out the whole time!

Thanks for a great read!

I like the subtle references to fandoms outside of the norm in your story, and the deliberate manner of your main character. She's got spunk, and class, a very rare combination, and something difficult to pull off, but you've done it beautifully. I'm really impressed.

In addition to that, you've got a very realistic scene set here, and Ryan is particularly delicious. An admirable answer to a challenge. 

Wow, that was a very sensually written piece. The atmosphere you creat in your club is wonderful; how you begin with it being a little oppresive and very strange and then slowly it begins to take on a sensual air, allowing the reader to feel the sexual tension and just the overall feeling that the characters undergo in the piece. It was really well done

Great Job.

This is a great exploration of a world I've never really taken part in...a world of overt sexuality and alternative lifestyle.  I enjoyed the characterization of Janis, who had nothing but disdain for the lifestyle, but ended up not only being a part of it, but enjoying it.  This was a different take on the average romantic story, and I really enjoyed it!

I think this is your best posted work yet.