scary...
well written without being too graphic.
but yes, I am scared, should not have read this before bed.
good job...
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Reviews For Safe Place
Reviewer: starrybluepoet (Signed)
12/03/09 - 10:27 pm
Reviewer: sierraquill1715 (Signed)
05/01/08 - 10:11 am
Reviewer: Rynn (Signed)
06/08/07 - 12:23 am
This is great. I think you've managed to capture the POV of a deranged murderer VERY well. This is very interesting, and I can't wait to see what goes on next!
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Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
28/03/07 - 08:09 pm
Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
28/03/07 - 02:29 pm
Wow... I really don't know what to say to that.THe man you have portrayed here is extremely sick and I suppose that made your writing really really good. That you could portray those emotions and make us see through his eyes and see his sickness means you did a good job.
The imagery in the piece was very well depicted and your plot was well developed.
Excellent Job. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
09/03/07 - 04:20 pm
Wonderful start.
The atmosphere is tense and chilling and moves at a very good pace.
Can't wait to read more.
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