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Reviews For Elkheart Woods
Reviewer: Rynn (Signed)
05/08/07 - 09:58 pm
Your style of writing is phenomenal! The way you write is descriptive, yet simple enough to keep us hooked and entertained. The way you managed to keep us shrouded in mystery is splendid - I was never good with suspense. I'd really, really love a second chapter, a continuation to this!
Reviewer: Lady Apostrophe (Signed)
05/07/07 - 04:12 pm
I loved it. An amazing start. Obviously I can't wait to find out about these books, but "the man in the black coat" is giving me the creeps and therefore making me wonder...
I absolutely love an introduction that's not...introductory. You started this out by leaving open a million windows and doors for possibility, rather than expaining who, what, when, where, and why. That's refreshing. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
06/04/07 - 10:56 pm
Okay, I am really looking forward to reading more of this story. I think you did an awesome job at grabbing the reader's attention with this first chapter. I know you certainly have me captivated. I look forward to reading more. Good Job.
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Reviewer: Oracle (Anonymous)
23/02/07 - 10:43 am
I think this is a positively fantastic start to the story. I'm completely intrigued, which is exactly what you want in a reader, I'm sure! :) I want to know what those books are, and more importantly, WHO IS THIS 'SERVANT'?
I will be watching this story eagerly, Fatima, and will leave more detailed critiques as the story continues, but for now all I can say is great start!
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