Hi, Niki, it's nice to see you outside of MNFF! :D
I love this story - I felt really sorry for Stewart; he was trying his best! Maybe he's better off without her. :p
I liked how it wasn't just one massive thing that split them up, it was loads of little things - it made it more realistic.
I liked Stewarts character as well - his reactions seemed real. And I thought that Olivia was being very selfish.