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Reviewer: LadyMortis (Signed)
15/02/07 - 02:06 pm

That was very well written. The ending scene was not seedy or extremely detailed but basically told you what would happen. You did a good job with this one. Good Luck for the Valentine's day challenge

Reviewer: Oracle (Anonymous)
15/02/07 - 12:35 pm

This was a very neat period peace.  I enjoyed the descriptions of her wanderings in the garden at the very beginning, of the fact that she was worried about something as simple as the fact that she was not wearing her shoes.

I was a little bit confused about Romulan...why does he hate her so much?  Is there a reason behind it, or just jealousy for not being the favored child?

I loved the last was tastefully done, and I like the way it was tied into her new servitude to Diana.  That made sense to me, and the story rang true.

The last line...wowzers!  :) 

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