Loved the story, Keep up the good work.As a colonial you won’t know the difference, and it does not detract from the story,
but The Lack District is not in Devon. Also it is DEVON not Devonshire.
Having said that, the story was fantastic.
This was a pretty good story. I didn’t like every thing about it and I even hated parts of it, but overall it was a good read. Thank you for writing it.