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Reviewer: ethan (Anonymous)
01/26/2006 09:24 am
it was great i cant wait for the next chapter


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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/30/2005 02:51 pm
Ch.1 - - Odd how you have two Head Girls, but it makes the plot evidently. This has a lot of potential.


The New Heads
Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl (Signed)
09/11/2005 06:49 pm
It's a nice start! I would encourage you to stick in more descriptions of places though to help the reader visualize. I know we all assume that we know what things look like but seeing them for your POV is important. I hope you enjoy writing this and I'm glad to see you posting here!


The New Heads
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