I really like this story. I imagine there will be more, though you could probably end it here and leave it a very successful R/H story. Of course, H/G folks like me will demand at least one more chapter! ;)
Hey!! Just read all three chapters...I'm betting that this will end soon!! I liked both R/Hr and H/G romance!! So fluffy!! But because I'm an H/G maniac I have to request for more H/G romance....I know it's a Hermione POV but what can I say!! The dialogue was excellent though!!
To be honest, I had my doubts about Hermione giggling and Ginny being the make-up artist at first, but it works, strangely enough. The flying scene was really good, though I do wonder a little about her going from scared of flying to loving it, so quickly. It's a nice scene, though. I like it. The thirds chapter, IMO, is the best one yet. I really liked the overheard conversation, with the girls discovering everything flowing underneath, so to speak. I look forward to more of this one.
Excellent story! Your prose is reall outstanding here and I think you've got all the characters just right. I love that Ron is completely entranced and Harry barely even notices anything. I could absolutely see it going down that way. It would have been great if Ginny had slugged Harry for being such an insensitive clod. :)
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