The poor dates. Harry should have acted in the show 'Eight Simple Rules for Dating My Teenage Daughter' Hehehe! He was scary The end of the chapter was again extremely dark and I loved your characterisation of Harry when he;s angry
Malcom Dursley? Nice name for Dudley! Harry was intense in this chapter. More than I have seen him in the books or anu fanfiction story and it worked for me
Brilliant, brilliant chapter! I'm sure you're pretty disgusted with the series of reviews, but I honestly don't care. I loved the way Harry dealt with Kilborn :) and the surprise at the end on his connections with Malfoy
Great story -one TINY quibble- the breed of dog is Newfoundland. :P No ER. Awesome, awesome story- but darnit, it snapped me right out of the narrative to go "Hey, big typo!"
I was worried in the last bits that everyone would die. And the dark lord... i hate that bastard.
Thanks for the story and the lack of killing every single character, that would be rediculous. :)
you see, i've always liked snape. i was pissed after book 6. really pissed, so i'm hanging onto a smidgen of hope for 7.
this chapter hit me with that hope even more. cool, just plain cool.