I cant even begin to tell you how "wrong" this was on so many levels. All I could do was sit here and chuckle at some of the points. I cna only imagine the Dursleys reactions to meeting Luna...you have to continue this bunny uch much further.
I told you it was finished! As I told you before I loved this fic! I really hope you make a sequel and do a "Meet the Lovegoods" or "Meet the Dursleys" haha I can just imagine what Uncle Dursley would say if Luna mentions a nargle, or a Crumpled-horned Snorkack. hahaha!!! Love it. Top marks, of course
I really, really liked this! I would love to see another chapter with Dudley's interaction with Harry, and to see if he escaped the party without extra limbs or bat-bogeys flying around his face! :-)
Also, your characterization of Luna was wonderful...I could totally envision Hermione tearing out her hair while talking to her and trying to remain nice. Loved it!
Great job, and I look forward to more of your writing!
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