I have to say that this chapter is emotionally 'tense' you can see the agony with Ginny as she is being confronted with seeing her deepest desire 'dashed'. You also see poor Harry trying to get a word in edgewise as everyone goes on and on about his love life as if he wasn't there. Nice culmination of something that had been building for three chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you. I barely did anything to this chapter because I was always happy with how it turned out the first time. Anyway, more writing to get to...
Poor Harry...he needs a road map to his own heart. It is almost painful seeing him this clueless about his own feelings. Poor Ginny...to be so close to what she's always wanted...yet so far away. Nice little take on the chaste nap.
Author's Response: Lol... yeah. Next chapter is the really fun one, of course. Hopefully I'll finish that up tomorrow!
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