I don't know. I just can't see Harry having his act together this much. Perhaps he is in Ginny's eyes in her fourth year, but not in her sixth year or beyond. She will be more together by then, and I think Harry would be less confident under any manner.
But this IS very well written. You are well beyond your age group and the public school system. Have you written anything of length?
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