aww! at first, i didnt know who she was getting married to. i was soo distraught, what if it wasnt harry? ohmigod!! who else could it be? dean? i was soo nervous, and their strange behaviour towards one another threw me off completely. well done i say!!
I just walked my younger daughter down the aisle last Sunday, so this story appealed to me very much. I especially liked the way that you kept the focus on Ginny and her point of view, letting us know that Harry was to be the groom only after piquing our curiosity thoroughly. Slipping in that Ginny was a Puddlemere chaser at the end was a nice touch as well. The whole tone of the piece was consistently light and fun. I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for sharing this with us all.
I love the idea of the knut. It was very clever to put this at the very end after all the dizzy atmosphere created when someone gets married. You really depicted the flurry of activities that go on before the actual ceremony very well. I suggest that full stops would have been more effective than the dashes. In the context with which you have included these dashes, the ful stops would have given the sentences a more dramatic effect.
I clicked on this story from the home page so I wasn't sure who you had Ginny marrying. I think it was great that you went through almost the entire thing barely even mentioning him. I am so glad that Molly didn't make everything pink (not very fond of the colour either).
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