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Reviewer: Dianne (Anonymous)
09/01/2005 05:42 pm
i reallly liked your challenge and thought I'd read a couple more of your stories. You're very talented and I really enjoyed this story as well. I haven't read many seventh year fics yet so this was a treat! Thanks!

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Reviewer: rdprice29 (Signed)
08/26/2005 07:28 am
*Sigh* This was just beautiful, Greta! I especially loved how he couldn't say no to her once she touched him, nor could he look her in the eye to send her away for her own "safety". Just wonderful!

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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
08/21/2005 09:37 pm
Now this was excellent. I could see this really happening in canon. It would make sense that the couples would become more 'established' under these circumstances.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I tried to make this story as IC as possible. I'm glad you liked it.

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Reviewer: Daksian (Anonymous)
08/12/2005 08:50 pm
Nicely done Greta! Well written, with a good emotional impact. You created an interesting scenario with Ginny coming across the trio's campsite. I'm curious as to how she found them though. Other than that, your attention to detail was excellent. I love the details that an author puts in their story; I enjoyed your view of the 'unknown Ravenclaw or Gryffindor item'--a golden quill is very appropriate for Ravenclaw. Using the tent from the World Cup was an excellent thought as well, and the idea of keeping watch was a perfect way to set up the plot. Harry's emotions were well played out as well; he's obviously stretched thin, and it shows in his initial reaction to Ginny. His struggle with her staying is believable, as was his eventual acceptance. Again, well done, and thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you Daksian. I really wanted to think of something special for a Horcrux we did not know. Ravenclaw's intelligence could only remind me of another inteligent witch we know and love who like to shop for quills-Hermione of course. From there on the road was easy. I like details too, and after HBP, I think that one can't have too many of them in a story. Thanks again

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Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
08/11/2005 08:40 pm
Very nice story. I'd love to know how she tracked them down. I like the way you portray Ginny. At first, I wasn't sure about the almost animalistic reaction Harry had to her, but after considering it, it makes a lot of sense. He's been on the run, camping in the wild, etc. He'd be a bit paranoid. Great job!

Author's Response: I wanted to portray Harry being like that...thinking like a fugitive. The end of HBP has me thinking that Harry's next step will be a lot like that; Horcrux hunting and hiding from Voldemort during his quest. Thanks for the kind words!

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