Ch.4 - - Fascinating.
And now I have read in your Author's Profile that you have quit posting this tale.
I am not sure I will go on if it stops abruptly, incompleted.
Fine work, though.
Ch.3 - - back to typical teenagers.
It's nice that they can do that at least a little bit.
Under the Influence
Ch.2 - - Realistic - some of the most realiztic greaving for Sirius I have read.
Ch.1 - - Very interesting story. A primarily angsty fluff piece, but there has to eb something more. It's written all over it in everything but words.
Fine writing and excellent conversational styling.
A Secret Revealed