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Reviews For Volcano
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/12/2005 01:35 pm
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/12/2005 01:25 pm
Ch.2 - - Terrific - Realistic fluffy angst killing. Still angsty though.
Next chapter to go to fulfillment of the promise.
Excellent writing.
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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/12/2005 12:21 pm
Ch.1 - - Detailed and indepth angst. You've done a good job of making their situation hopeless - Ginny miserable and Harry irratable.
Fascinating - hopefully leading to a genuinely believeable fluffy scenario.
Cheers!
Longing
Reviewer: Desslok (Anonymous)
08/08/2005 10:18 pm
Interesting story. I really like the characterization of Ginny here, and I think you handled the "Dean Problem" really well. I would have liked to see a litle more from Harry. He just doesn't seem worthy of her in this. I never got the sense that he really liked her enough to justify his treatment of her. Your prose is excellent and I look forward to reading more of your stories! Thanks for writing/posting it!
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