Ch.1 - - Detailed and indepth angst. You've done a good job of making their situation hopeless - Ginny miserable and Harry irratable.
Fascinating - hopefully leading to a genuinely believeable fluffy scenario.
Interesting story. I really like the characterization of Ginny here, and I think you handled the "Dean Problem" really well. I would have liked to see a litle more from Harry. He just doesn't seem worthy of her in this. I never got the sense that he really liked her enough to justify his treatment of her. Your prose is excellent and I look forward to reading more of your stories! Thanks for writing/posting it!
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