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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/14/2006 01:42 pm

An interesting little story, very different. It could use more polish - you separated the end there, but I'm really not sure why - but I think you did a good job with this. It was refreshing.

150 points is really quite a lot, though. Maybe try a smaller number, like eighty or so.



Author's Response: I wrote this story over a year ago and I'm glad you like it.  The reason I separated the end was that at the time I was exploring actually writing Professor McGonagall's confrontation of Severus Snape.  After several false starts I gave up: I was never satisfied with the results and thought the story still had merit without that scene.  Thanks for your review.

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Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
09/29/2005 10:10 pm
I liked this story. It's certainly unique. MacGonagall is well-worth some fics examining her character and motivations and this is a nice one. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I appreciate your taking the time to write down your thoughts. McGonagall is my idea of the perfect teacher and it was fun to walk around in her head for a day or two.

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Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl (Signed)
08/16/2005 03:13 pm
Hehe... that was cute! I don't think I've ever read a story before from McG's POV and this was refreshing. Usually I try and leave something helpful in a review so my only comment is this (and you should know I had to struggle to think of something) anyway, a few more descriptions of the places or people never hurts. Again, great job! :-D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. I love Professor McGonagall; she 's the kind of teacher I've always wanted to be and when she adds house points to Gryffindor's bulb at the end of OotP, I couldn't help feeling that she was being more than fair. Also, I began wondering how she might view the house point race each year and that little plot bunny just begged me to go exploring. Also, thank you for the suggestion...I will ponder upon it.

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