Reviewer: Daksian (Anonymous)
08/05/2005 03:29 pm
As always Melinda, you've produced a top quality story. I loved that they both thought they initiated the kiss--it makes it much more better that way, I think. The chocolate was a great touch, especially how they kept getting messy with it! ;) Was it perhaps a nod to the infamous Chocolate in the Library scene from OotP?
I think JKR did us a favour by not putting too much romance in the book; after all, with the plot of the 7th book already defined with the Horcrux hunt, we'll need the missing moments to keep fanfiction going! I hope you'll provide a few more of them, and I'd love to see your take on the inevitable reunion of H/G.
Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't seen this angle done yet, so I was anxious to get it in, lol. It seems within both of their characters. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, the chocolate was in honor of the Easter egg scene. I think all H/G moments from now on should include some chocolate ;)
Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny