Colin... this was wonderful. I love how everyone seemed to know about Harry and Ginny but Harry and Ginny. It was delightful. Very fluffy. I also liked the strawberries... I have some good memmories of chocolate covered strawberries myself. Thank you for the great read.
good fluffy one-shot that could have been a missing moment in HBP if JK had move the H/G moments up sooner in the book. I lone seeing Hermionie getting inspiration from Ginny and doing witout thinking. Love it, and when's the next chp?
Aww, that was a sweet little story! At the begining it seemed like Hermione was either jealous or was wanting to be the one who helped Harry. You know, that whole trio thing. Hehehe, poor kids, to have their parents and maybe even others of the order watching their first kiss. That seems like something Fred and George would do. I like the chocolate strawberries too. Now that was a great idea! How Harry seemed to relate the ripples that faded from the rock to the people around him was great. I loved that. All ripples fade away and he's right in the middle. One by one each ripple ends and all that's left is a lonely rock and the rock is the reason the ripples were around it. So it would be the rock's fault for jumping into the water. That's how I saw it anyhow. I liked how you made Harry all shy. (Personally I think that's in character, much more in character than JK's.) But anyway, you wrote it well. :)
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