Winky and Dobby, I'm wondering why you haven't got any review yet... isn't your master paying attention to what you do?
Oh I was forgetting that... your master is Harry... harry Potter and paying attention aren't words that fit together.
Well, what shall I say. I laughed so hard reading this fic. The humour is masterfully written and lets me pass over americanisms like "gotten" (which here makes people giggle a bit, so maybe it's doing its purpose anyway). There aren't many americanisms though, well done to cmply with canon!
Youknow what I liked the best? The bit about Lily thinking about how stupid a man would be staying there waiting 20 minutes since there was another bathroom just for men next door.
the silly thing you never notice when you should ;) I don't like James, but I like the James you portray here. I'm only talking about chapter one anyway.
let's go reading chapter two... I shall tell you later :)
Author's Response: Dobby: Yeah, James was a bit stoopid about the bathroom thingo... Winky: YOu don't spell stoopid like that, you stoopid idiot!
Who is REALLY Head Boy?