Really nice chapter..... the thought of Crabbe and Goyle having dialogues is crazy since JK says they grunt most of the time....the only time they spoke was when Harry and Ron dressed up like them
The Dementor scene was slightly weird in my opinion because they suddenly came and went. Sheesh... there I rant again about tiny flaws :-S
I love the story and hats off to you for putting such a phenomenol effort in this
I have read TOD... I reviewed on other fanfic sites and I hope to review it once you put it up :-)
I'm a London Lions fan.... GO LIONS
So do you have your Lions shirt yet??? I'm going to meet Kelpie, my Brit-picker, for the first time while on this trip! We're both going to wear Lions shirts so we'll recognize each other! :-D Go to www.thesculptedhorse.com/abraxan.html to order one. I don't keep a lot in stock, and as I said, I'm going on vacation, but I'll fill your order ASAP. If you're ordering a size over XL, I'll need to send you an email with a Paypal button in it, because I couldn't figure out how to put in so many different prices (the shipping is more on the larger sizes, as well as the cost of the shirts being more - I'm offering sizes up to 10 XL, and yes, I HAVE filled orders for shirts that size).
Hey, don't rant about tiny flaws NOW! :-D I'm not changing these stories - they are what they are and I've moved on to other things (my original novel, some ficlets to fill in the gaps in Destiny's epilogue). And you're right, it was a HUGE effort - over two years of my life to write, polish and upload these two. If I'd been doing them for real-life publication, I would've spent longer on them, but I had a "chapter a week" upload schedule that was sometimes hard to meet! Glad you're enjoying my stories! Thanks for reviewing on here - this has been a particularly slow site for my stories for some reason.
Christmas Shopping in Hogsmeade