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Another great chapter... but I cant understand why Harry and the others dont respond and take care of Malfoy once and for all... seems he keeps throwing spells at them and they do nothing :(
I hope fetter boy gets his 'just desserts' soon
They can't take care of him until I'm good and ready for them to do so, LOL! You'll see. . .
Abraxan
another wonderful chapter. I am so happy at your long chapter lengths.
Thanks! The long chapters work well online, but I'm finding that in my original novel(s) that I'm working on, I need to keep them shorter in order to keep the novel at the proper length so publishers will be interested in it. *sigh* I like long chapters, too. Glad you liked it!
Abraxan
The whole chapter was magnificent.... the scene at the end was particularly gory... but well done. I can believe Voldemort could do something like that.
Thanks a lot! War isn't pretty, so some of these chapters HAVE to be gory, icky, yucky. I've had soldiers in Iraq say I've done a really good job on my battle scenes, so I'm really honored that they think they're good. I'm trying to be as realistic as possible within a fantasy framework. Glad you liked it!
Abraxan
LOL
This chapter was cool! I loved the animagus transformations.
Thanks!
Abraxan
I love your writing style... the whole chapter was amazing.
I specially love how you write Hermione and Ron. I loved how you had Hermione deal with Millicent.
Hee!
I LOVED the whole 'Harry's fangirls' bit... it was hilarious.
Also loved the scene between Harry and Snape in the Potions dungeon.
Wonderful writing.
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying my story!
Abraxan
These chapters seem to get better and better.
I think its going to be hard to keep Harry from blowing up the ferret boy.. but if he does blow him up it might be fun to see ;)
Lovely writing :)
Thanks very much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Abraxan
Brilliant battle scene... Harry kicked some Death Eater backside.....and it was fun to read
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it.
Abraxan
Another cliffy..... Another great chapter.... The only thing I'm slightly doubtful about is the spelling of Romania. Is it Rumania or Romania or is it the English and American spelling over there?
My Brit-picker INSISTS on the spelling I used as the correct one in England. I've had a few Brits argue this point, but I'm not changing it. Kelpie's word is law where Brit-picking is concerned! ;-) Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Abraxan
Another cliffy..... Another great chapter.... The only thing I'm slightly doubtful about is the spelling of Romania. Is it Rumania or Romania or is it the English and American spelling over there?