Ch.3 - - A cliffie - oh, no. Solve it quickly, please.
You've made the transition between school enemies believeable, especially since they were subconciously attracted to each other all along, and Sirius knew it.
Dinner and a Swingset
Ch.2 - - I like this - very much.
I can see it happening - good writing - I hear them saying these things.
Grand - more pleae.
Ch.1 - - Interesting start. I cna see it happen - Liliy, not the prnaker, but difinitely capable of vicious pranks when appropriate.
The whole no-greater-fury-in-the-netherworld-than-a-woman-scorned thing.
Winky: Hey, Amelia! We read your thingy on ff.net!
Dobby: So we checked it out!
Winky: You are really cool
.DObby: Winky wants you to write to her - she misses you!
Winky: Yeah. write me!
DobbY: WE think ur story rox. Keep it up!