Reviews For The Greatest Power

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Reviewer: cts (Signed)
04/05/2011 10:48 pm
Again, good character development, and good building of the back story. Quite well done.

Author's Response:

I was definitely trying to build characters here, but I'm not sure if I knew, at the time I was writing this, exactly what the backstory was going to be.  I know now, of course, but I didn't then.  It's an interesting thing, authorship.




Chapter 6: Assigning Blame
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
04/05/2011 10:37 pm
Good backstory development, good character development. Just too bloody short :)

Author's Response:

Not all of us can manage 10K words/chapter.  :) That's for the better fanficcers.




Chapter 5: Off the Radar
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
04/05/2011 10:03 pm
Another emotional chapter; and well done. The character development here is distinct and well done.

Author's Response:

Thanks




Chapter 4: In Excellent Care
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
04/05/2011 09:55 pm
A very well done and emotional chapter. The mood was set and managed quite well.

Author's Response:

Thanks




Chapter 3: Almost Nothing Left
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
04/05/2011 09:45 pm
Too short, but good plot development. I approve of the tweaking in the re-write.

Author's Response:

I'm glad :)




Chapter 2: Reflections
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
04/05/2011 09:36 pm
It is great to see this story revised and back on line. It's a favorite, and one I am looking forward to re-read. The characterization is superbly done, the dialog very much in cannon, and the plot an example of how good fan fiction can be as good as the real McCoy.

Author's Response:

Thanks!




Chapter 1: In the Night
Reviewer: dopey4dobby (Signed)
04/05/2011 06:10 pm
YAY! I love this story soooo much! I've told my friend about it, but I don't know if she'll read it or not... hopefully she will!!!!!
~d4d~

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you!  There is no better compliment!




Chapter 34: Time Out to be a Teen
Reviewer: dopey4dobby (Signed)
04/05/2011 12:48 am
*Sigh* Thank goodness! I didn't even realize that I was holding my breath, until I finished reading!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
~d4d~

Author's Response:

It's coming!  :)  I'm so glad you're still enjoying it.




Chapter 33: Reversing the Trend
Reviewer: dopey4dobby (Signed)
04/04/2011 02:07 am
OH MY GOODNESS! I NEED MOAR!!! :) Keep up the frequent updating!! This is so intense!!!!!
~d4d~

Author's Response:

It is kind of a massive ride of intensity for the rest of the fic.  I hope you keep enjoying it!




Chapter 32: A Shift in Paradigm
Reviewer: dopey4dobby (Signed)
04/01/2011 07:36 pm
Uh oh! :) I love this story, keep it up!!
~d4d~

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're still enjoying it!  More to come soon!




Chapter 31: Draco's Christmas
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