Absolutely loved this. I think you did a wonderful job capturing Sookie's thoughts and I thoroughly enjoyed the way you depicted the relationship between Eric and Sookie. Great job!
YAY! I am so very pleased to have this fic as our first submission to our Southern Vampire archive. You've captured Sookie's voice incredibly well - and she's such a fun character to play with.
I hope we'll be seeing more SVS fics from you!
(This is myownmuggle, by the way. Morrigan is my new alter ego for modding purposes.)