Very interesting. There were a few grammar errors, like using "ill" isntead of "I'll" (this caught me off guard for a minute) but otherwise, very nice. Great job!
HI! Allow me the honour of being the first reviewer for this story here at wt. I could not picture having a sister added to HP...until you pulled it off perfectly. Julia works in seamlessly like she's always been there and I really like the concept for many reasons. One of them is that Julia has diabetes but she does not let that get her downand she is so brave in her reasons for not telling Harry. Most of the alternate Universe stories I have read, have no real reason for being in that category other than for the time period in which they were written. Yours however, offers so much like new characters that blend perfectly with the canon ones. Your characters, particularly your own Julia, are very enjoable and intriguing to read and her interaction with Dudley definitely pulls readers in wondering just what is going on with him and what he is up to. Post some more of this fantastic story here at wt! I think it will do very well here, and I'd absolutely love to read a challenge story that you should write someday! This story proves that you have the talent and the imagination for sure!